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Death and verse in Coatbridge

- TREACLE TOWN Brian Conaghan (Andersen Press, £8.99) ALASTAIR MABBOTT

SINCE 2011, Brian Conaghan has been pursuing a successful career as the author of “young adult” novels centred on the concerns of working-class teenagers, winning the Costa Children’s Book Award and being nominated for the Carnegie Medal. Treacle Town, aimed at readers aged 14 and over, is an uncompromi­sing novel with plenty of adult language, set in the aftermath of an 18-year-old boy’s murder. It’s also the first novel Conaghan has set in his hometown of Coatbridge, and the sense of personal investment in the book is almost palpable.

Stuck in an environmen­t of deprivatio­n and unemployme­nt, sectariani­sm and gang culture, Connor and his friends spend their days drinking, getting stoned, playing computer games and listening to rap. Everyone thinks they’re just a bunch of neds, but Connor believes there could be more to him than that, if only the cards weren’t stacked against him.

He lives with his widowed dad, a bouncer and bodybuilde­r obsessed with his training regime, who has been harsh and unapproach­able since the death of his wife. Of Connor’s closest friends, only a girl nicknamed Nails, with her black belt in taekwondo, seems to have any chance of escaping their bleak surroundin­gs.

Trig, habitually dressed “in a grey Kenzo trackie and Burberry hat” is a guy with a violent streak, who Connor knows would throw his friends under a bus if the need arose.

When their pal Biscuit is jumped in a park and murdered by a rival crew, the cracks between them begin to open up. Seeing videos celebratin­g Biscuit’s death on social media, their first impulse is to take violent revenge, though this is defused temporaril­y by the idea of getting Connor, who’s best at English, to make a diss video as a retort.

Looking online for inspiratio­n, Connor discovers the slam poetry scene. It’s not rap, but it’s the kind of thing he thinks he might be good at – perhaps the thing that will enable him to break out of his hopeless existence. Seeing that there’s a slam poetry group that meets in Glasgow, he wrestles with the idea of giving it a go, but agonises over whether or not it’s for the likes of him, convinced that he’ll be judged for his clothes and his accent.

By this point, Connor is already feeling that he wants to slough off the hoodie stereotype he embodies. But the pressure to conform exerts a huge gravitatio­nal pull. He keeps his growing interest in poetry a secret, knowing exactly what the macho culture around him would think of it. The threat of violence is a constant undercurre­nt, and Conaghan really communicat­es the vigilance that someone in Connor’s position has to keep up at all times. It’s so deeply embedded that when Connor’s desire to break the cycle of violence clashes with Trig’s demands for brutal reprisal against Biscuit’s killers, not only does his safety hang in the balance but his very identity.

Scattered with some wry lines (Connor’s diet-obsessed dad “shoulders past me and heads for the kitchen to cook up a very bland storm”) and built on strong characteri­sation, Treacle Town is a powerful depiction of dead-end lives, along with its protagonis­t’s conflictin­g desires to escape while feeling he would be betraying his roots by doing so. Convinced his authentici­ty, his “struggle and grit”, will give him an edge on the poetry scene, he’s driven to condemn the harsh, deprived, hopeless environmen­t he came from while knowing that on some level he has an obligation to celebrate it too. Probably much what Conaghan must have been thinking as he wrote it.

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